1) I resolved the tangly hair on the left.
2) I made the sail a robust olive green and the body sky blue.
3) I used Picasso’s multi-viewpoint technique in her face incorprating a profile and frontal face.
4) I had some loose strands of hair which she is plaiting.
I feel much more positive about her now. I know that she looks rather flat but this is a trial and the finished piece will always be more exciting, whether screen printed or in watercolour.